Most of my clients know what they want their book's takeaway to be.
It may be to demonstrate kindness, overcome fear, be a good friend, learn responsibility, learn about conservation, become self-confident, learn coping strategies, realize the importance of family…
Now and then, though, I still get clients who think a list of events constitutes a good story. They have a tough time understanding the elements that make a story work, such as character arc, story arc, plot, and a story’s takeaway.
WHAT IS A BOOK’S TAKEAWAY?
The takeaway in children’s writing is the central message, moral, or theme readers are meant to understand or remember after finishing the story. It's what leaves an impact, inspires thought, or teaches a lesson. In children’s literature, the takeaway is typically simple, clear, and age-appropriate, often woven seamlessly into the story, and should be conveyed subtly.
With this in mind, the takeaway is what’s valuable in the book. It’s what the reader will find memorable, leaving a lasting impression that will hopefully prompt them to consider new perspectives or apply what they've learned to their own lives.
The themes I see the most from my clients are: -Be who you are -Kindness -Bullying -Acceptance -Making friends -Being a good friend -Environment
EXAMPLES OF TAKEAWAYS IN CHILDREN’S WRITING
Picture book: “Stephanie’s Ponytail” by Robert Munsch.
Stephanie is upset because the kids in her class copy every hairdo she creates. Finally, she outwits them, and they never copy her hairdo again.
As well as being a fun read, the takeaway teaches children about creativity, independence, self-confidence, imagination, and being daring. It could very well inspire them to take the same actions.
Picture book: “The Gruffalo” by Julia Donaldson
The small mouse avoids danger by inventing a fearsome Gruffalo, only to find out that bravery (and a little wit) can save the day.
The takeaway shows that intelligence and resourcefulness can overcome fear and physical strength.
Early Reader: “Frog and Toad Are Friends” by Arnold Lobel
Frog and Toad show loyalty, kindness, and understanding through small, everyday adventures.
The takeaway of this story is what true friendship is. It’s supporting each other, no matter the situation.
Chapter book: “Walking Through Walls” by Karen Cioffi
The protagonist, Wang, begins his journey as a selfish, lazy kid. But as he strives to become rich and powerful, his heart is opened to what riches and power really mean.
The takeaway is twofold: not everything is as it seems, and richness and power can mean more than gaining external things. It touches on friendship, loyalty, honesty, and hard work.
Middle-Grade Fiction: “Wonder” by R.J. Palacio
Auggie’s journey of attending school for the first time with a noticeable facial difference teaches him and his classmates about compassion.
The takeaway shows that kindness and acceptance can overcome prejudice and fear of differences.
TIPS ON CRAFTING TAKEAWAYS IN CHILDREN’S WRITING
It's All About Subtlety: Avoid overt preaching; let the actions and consequences of the characters deliver the message.
Example: Instead of saying, “Sharing is good,” show a character sharing their toys and making a new friend.
Make It Relatable: Focus on themes children experience, like friendship, bravery, or honesty.
Example: A boy overcomes his fear of public speaking to join the school play, teaching bravery and confidence.
Keep It Age-Appropriate: Simplify complex themes for younger readers. For older kids, explore deeper ideas like compassion or resilience.
End on a Positive Note: Even if the story includes struggles or setbacks, it should leave readers with hope or encouragement.
TAKEAWAY IN PRACTICE
Imagine you’re writing a story about a lonely dragon who learns to write poems that bring joy to the townspeople.
The takeaway could be: “Using your unique talents can connect you to others.” Instead of saying this outright, you’d show how the dragon’s poetry gradually breaks down fears and builds friendships.
The key is to balance storytelling with meaning, allowing the message to shine through the actions and emotions of the characters.
So, as you’re writing your children’s story, think of the takeaway. What message do you want to instill in the reader?
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