Get Expert Guidance as You Write Your Children’s Book
Writing a children’s picture book or chapter book can feel exciting at first… until questions and uncertainty start creeping in.
• Is the story structure working?
• Is the pacing too slow—or too rushed?
• Are the storyline, vocabulary, and characters age-appropriate?
• Are the characters engaging and relatable?
• Is there a full character arc?
• What should the average word count per chapter be?
• What about the theme?
• Is the word count appropriate for the genre?
• What should happen next?
The list goes on, but you don’t have to figure it out alone.
I help aspiring, first-time, and ‘newish’ authors develop stronger, more engaging children’s books through personalized coaching, feedback, and step-by-step guidance.
Whether you’re starting with an idea, a rough draft, or a partially completed manuscript, I’ll help you move forward with clarity and confidence.
What Coaching Helps You Do
Through one-on-one coaching, you’ll learn how to:
✔ Develop a strong story structure
✔ Create engaging, believable characters
✔ Improve pacing and chapter flow
✔ Write for the correct age group
✔ Strengthen dialogue and scene development
✔ Avoid common mistakes that weaken manuscripts
✔ Stay motivated and accountable
If you’ve used AI to help generate ideas or drafts, I can also help you refine and strengthen the writing so it feels natural, emotionally engaging, and reader-friendly.
Who This Is For
This coaching is ideal for:
• First-time children’s picture book or chapter book authors
• Writers feeling stuck or overwhelmed
• Authors who want expert guidance while writing
• Writers who want feedback before publishing
• Authors who want accountability and structure
COACHING OPTIONS
Picture Book Coaching
4-week coaching from $497
8-week coaching from $897
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Chapter Book Coaching
8-week coaching from $997
12-week coaching from $1,497
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AI Manuscript Coaching
4-week coaching from $497
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NOT SURE WHICH PROGRAM FITS YOU BEST?
You’ve got plenty of company. It’s normal to be unsure.
Start with a Professional Review of Your First 1,000 Words, and I’ll help guide you to the best next step for your manuscript and goals.
Investment: $67
How it works:
-Submit up to 1,000 words of your manuscript or draft to kcioffiventrice@gmail.com
-Include your target age group and genre
-Receive detailed feedback within 3–7 business days of purchase
