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Children’s Manuscript Review

Professional Children’s Manuscript Review of the First 1,000 Words of Your Chapter Book or Up to 1,000 Words of Your Picture Book
PRICE: $69

Get clear, expert feedback on your children’s book—so you know exactly what’s working and what to improve.

YOU’LL RECEIVE:
• Clear, honest feedback on your writing
• Insight into what’s working—and what’s not
• Specific, actionable suggestions to strengthen your story
• Guidance on your next best steps

HOW IT WORKS:
• Submit up to 1,000 words of your manuscript
• Include your target age group and genre
• Receive detailed feedback within 3–7 business days of purchase
• Each manuscript is considered one review

PERFECT FOR:
• First-time children’s authors who want professional guidance before moving forward
• Authors who aren’t sure what’s working and what isn’t
• AI-generated manuscripts
• Writers preparing to revise their manuscripts
• Authors considering a rewrite
• Self-publishing authors who want to strengthen their manuscript before investing in editing, illustrations, and publishing

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After purchase, email your manuscript in a Word document to kcioffiventrice@gmail.com. Please put MS Review in the subject line.

I'm a working children's ghostwriter, book doctor, and editor who would love to help you become author of your own children's book. Just send an email to kcioffiventrice@gmail.com

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