Writing a children’s picture book may look simple, but creating one that truly works takes skill, structure, and understanding of young readers.
Many aspiring and new authors struggle with questions like:
• Is my story too long?
• Does the structure work?
• Am I writing for the right age group?
• Is the ending satisfying enough?
• Does the story flow naturally?
You don’t have to figure it out alone.
I help aspiring, first-time, and newer children’s authors develop stronger, more engaging picture books through personalized coaching, feedback, and step-by-step guidance.
Whether you have an idea, a rough draft, or a manuscript that “still doesn’t feel right,” I’ll help you move forward with clarity and confidence.
WHAT COACHING HELPS YOU DO
Through one-on-one coaching, you’ll learn how to:
✔ Develop a clear, engaging story structure
✔ Create a stronger emotional connection
✔ Improve pacing and page flow
✔ Write for the correct age group
✔ Strengthen your ending
✔ Cut unnecessary words and tighten your manuscript
✔ Avoid common picture book mistakes
If you’ve used AI to help generate ideas or drafts, I can also help you refine the writing so it feels natural, emotionally engaging, and age-appropriate.
WHO THIS IS FOR
This coaching is ideal for:
• First-time and newer picture book authors
• Writers who feel stuck or overwhelmed
• Authors who aren’t sure if their story is working
• Writers who want feedback before publishing
• Authors who want structure, support, and accountability
COACHING OPTIONS
4-Week Picture Book Coaching Program
Get Clarity, Direction, and Momentum
Perfect for writers who:
• Need help strengthening their story
• Want guidance while writing or revising
• Need professional feedback and accountability
Includes:
✔ Weekly 30-minute coaching sessions
✔ Manuscript feedback and guidance
✔ Story structure and pacing help
✔ Email support between sessions
✔ Action steps after each session
Investment: $497
(Payment plan available)
Best for: Writers who want focused guidance and fast clarity
8-Week Picture Book Coaching Program
Build a Stronger, More Publishable Picture Book
This deeper-level program provides more support, detailed feedback, and additional guidance throughout the writing and revision process.
Perfect for writers who:
• Want more in-depth coaching
• Need help revising and refining their manuscript
• Want accountability and publishing guidance
Includes:
✔ Weekly 30-minute coaching sessions
✔ Ongoing manuscript feedback
✔ Story structure, pacing, and language guidance
✔ Emotional connection and page-turn support
✔ Email support between sessions
✔ Publishing readiness guidance
✔ Personalized action plans after each session
Investment: $897
(Payment plan available)
Best for: Writers who want a more guided, hands-on experience
What Makes This Different
This isn’t generic writing advice.
You’ll receive:
• Personalized coaching
• Honest, constructive feedback
• Clear next steps
• Guidance tailored specifically to children’s picture books
My goal is to help you create a picture book that truly connects with young readers—not just finish a manuscript.
Email me at kcioffiventrice@gmail.com to discuss which Coaching Program will work best for you!
Not Sure Which Program Will Fit You Best?
You have plenty of company. It’s completely normal.
Start with a Professional Review of Your First 1,000 Words, and I’ll help guide you toward the best next step for your manuscript and goals.
Investment: $67
How it works:
-Submit up to 1,000 words of your manuscript or draft to kcioffiventrice@gmail.com
-Include your target age group and genre
-Receive detailed feedback within 3–7 business days of purchase
FINAL NOTE
You don’t have to struggle through the writing process alone.
With the right guidance, structure, and feedback, you can create a children’s picture book you’re proud to share.
Email me at kcioffiventrice@gmail.com to discuss which Coaching Program will work best for you!