Writing a children’s chapter book can feel exciting at first… until questions and uncertainty start creeping in.
• Is the story structure working? • Is the pacing too slow—or too rushed? • Are the storyline, vocabulary, and characters age-appropriate? • Are the characters engaging and relatable? • Is there a full character arc? • What should the average word count per chapter be? • What about the theme? • Is the word count appropriate for the genre? • What should happen next?
The list goes on, but you don’t have to figure it out alone.
I help aspiring, first-time, and ‘newish’ authors develop stronger, more engaging children’s chapter books through personalized coaching, feedback, and step-by-step guidance.
Whether you’re starting with an idea, a rough draft, or a partially completed manuscript, I’ll help you move forward with clarity and confidence.
WHAT COACHING HELPS YOU DO
Through one-on-one coaching, you’ll learn how to: ✔ Develop a strong story structure ✔ Create engaging, believable characters ✔ Improve pacing and chapter flow ✔ Write for the correct age group ✔ Strengthen dialogue and scene development ✔ Avoid common mistakes that weaken manuscripts ✔ Stay motivated and accountable
If you’ve used AI to help generate ideas or drafts, I can also help you refine and strengthen the writing so it feels natural, emotionally engaging, and reader-friendly.
WHO THIS IS FOR
This coaching is ideal for: • First-time children’s chapter book authors • Writers feeling stuck or overwhelmed • Authors who want expert guidance while writing • Writers who want feedback before publishing • Authors who want accountability and structure
COACHING OPTIONS
Build Momentum and Strengthen Your Story
Perfect for writers who: • Need guidance and accountability • Want help developing or improving their manuscript • Are actively writing and ready to move forward
Includes: ✔ Weekly 30-minute coaching sessions ✔ Manuscript feedback and guidance ✔ Email support between sessions ✔ Story structure and pacing help ✔ Writing assignments and next-step action plans
Investment: $997 (Get $60 off for upfront payment or choose a payment plan.)
Best for: Writers who want focused support and momentum
From Draft to Stronger, More Publishable Manuscript
This deeper-level program provides more support, feedback, and guidance throughout the writing process.
Perfect for writers who: • Want more in-depth coaching • Need help shaping and refining their manuscript • Want stronger accountability and publishing guidance
Includes: ✔ Weekly 30-minute coaching sessions ✔ Ongoing manuscript feedback ✔ Detailed story development guidance ✔ Pacing, character, and structure support ✔ Email support between sessions ✔ Publishing readiness guidance ✔ Personalized action steps after each session
Investment: $1,497 (Get $90 off for upfront payment or choose a payment plan.)
Best for: Writers who want a more guided, start-to-finish experience
WHAT MAKES THESE PROGRAMS DIFFERENT
This isn’t generic writing advice.
You’ll receive: • Personalized guidance • Honest, constructive feedback • Clear next steps • Support tailored specifically to children’s chapter books
My goal is to help you create a manuscript that works—not just help you “finish writing.”
NOT SURE WHICH PROGRAM FITS YOU BEST?
That’s completely normal.
Start with a Professional Review of Your First 1,000 Words, and I’ll help guide you to the best next step for your manuscript and goals.
Investment: $67.00
How it works: -Submit up to 1,000 words of your manuscript or draft to kcioffiventrice@gmail.com -Include your target age group and genre -Receive detailed feedback within 3–7 business days of purchase
You don’t have to struggle through the writing process alone.
With the right guidance, feedback, and structure, you can move forward with confidence—and create a children’s chapter book you’re proud to share.
Email me at kcioffiventrice@gmail.com to discuss which Coaching Program will work best for you!
