What’s Your Takeaway?

Most of my clients know what they want the takeaway of their book to be. 

It may be to demonstrate kindness, overcome fear, be a good friend, learn responsibility, learn about conservation, become self-confident, learn coping strategies, realize the importance of family…

Now and then, though, I still get clients who think a list of events constitutes a good story. They have a tough time understanding the elements that need to go into making a story work, such as character arc, story arc, plot, and a story’s takeaway. 

WHAT IS A BOOK’S TAKEAWAY?

The takeaway in children’s writing refers to the central message, moral, or theme that readers are meant to understand or remember after finishing the story. It's what leaves an impact, inspires thought, or teaches a lesson. In children’s literature, the takeaway is typically simple, clear, and age-appropriate, often woven seamlessly into the story.

With this in mind, the takeaway is what’s valuable in the book – the message it conveys. It’s what the reader will find memorable or worthy of remembering. 

It’s much deeper than a summary or overall view of the story. It should leave a lasting impression that will prompt the reader to consider new perspectives or apply the information learned to their own lives.

The takeaway is important when writing for children because you want the reader to leave the book learning something, even if subconsciously. 

EXAMPLES OF TAKEAWAYS IN CHILDREN’S WRITING

Picture book: “Stephanie’s Ponytail” by Robert Munsch. 

To her dismay, the kids in Stephanie’s class copy every hairdo she creates. Finally, she outwits them, and they never copy her hairdo again. 

As well as being a fun read, the takeaway teaches children about creativity, independence, self-confidence, imagination, and being daring. It could very well inspire them to the same actions.

Picture book: “The Gruffalo” by Julia Donaldson

The small mouse avoids danger by inventing a fearsome Gruffalo, only to discover that bravery (and a little wit) can save the day.

The takeaway shows that intelligence and resourcefulness can triumph over fear and physical strength.

Early Reader: “Frog and Toad Are Friends” by Arnold Lobel

Frog and Toad show loyalty, kindness, and understanding through small, everyday adventures.

The takeaway of this story is what true friendship is. It’s supporting each other, no matter the situation.

Chapter book: “Walking Through Walls” by Karen Cioffi

The protagonist, Wang, begins his journey as a selfish, lazy kid. But striving to become rich and powerful, his heart is awakened to what riches and power really mean.

The takeaway is two-fold: not all things are as they appear, and richness and power can be more than gaining external things. It touches on friendship, loyalty, honesty, and hard work.

Middle-Grade Fiction: “Wonder” by R.J. Palacio

Auggie’s journey of attending school for the first time with a facial difference teaches him and his classmates about compassion.

The takeaway shows that kindness and acceptance can overcome prejudice and fear of differences.

TIPS ON CRAFTING TAKEAWAYS IN CHILDREN’S WRITING

Integrate the Lesson Naturally:
Avoid overt preaching; let the actions and consequences of the characters deliver the message.

Example: Instead of saying, “Sharing is good,” show a character sharing their toys and making a new friend.

Make It Relatable:
Focus on themes children experience, like friendship, bravery, or honesty.

Example: A boy overcomes his fear of public speaking to join the school play, teaching confidence.

Keep It Age-Appropriate:
Simplify complex themes for younger readers. For older kids, explore deeper ideas like compassion or resilience.

End on a Positive Note:
Even if the story includes struggles or setbacks, it should leave readers with hope or encouragement.

TAKEAWAY IN PRACTICE

Imagine you’re writing a story about a lonely dragon who learns to write poems that bring joy to the townspeople. 

The takeaway could be: “Using your unique talents can connect you to others.” Instead of saying this outright, you’d show how the dragon’s poetry gradually breaks down fears and builds friendships.

The key is to balance storytelling with meaning, allowing the message to shine through the actions and emotions of the characters.

So, as you’re writing your children’s story, think of the takeaway. What message do you want to instill in the reader?

I’m a working children’s ghostwriter, rewriter, editor, and coach. I can help turn your story into a book you’ll be proud to be the author of, one that’s publishable and marketable.

OTHER HELP I OFFER:

HOW TO WRITE A CHILDREN'S FICTION BOOK
A DIY book to help you write your own children’s book.

PICTURE BOOK, CHAPTER BOOK, MIDDLE GRADE COACHING
Four to twelve-week coaching programs.

WRITERS ON THE MOVE SELF-PUBLISHING SERVICE
Self-publishing help for children’s authors.

You can contact me at: kcioffiventrice@gmail.com. Or give me a call at 347—834—6700. (Please leave a message- I’ll get back to you as soon as I can.)