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What Makes a Good Fiction Story? Plot Driven vs. Character Driven

Posted on by Karen Cioffi
Plot driven vs. character driven

Stories can be plot-driven or character-driven, so which is the best formula to use when writing a story? Knowing a little about both methods should help in making a decision.

Plot Driven Story

A story’s plot moves the story forward from point A to point B. It doesn’t necessarily have to be in a straight line; in fact, a course that twists and turns is much better. This type of plot creates movement and interest. It’s the twists and turns that will keep the forward momentum fresh, as well as build anticipation. Anticipation will hold a reader’s attention.

The plot also provides reasons and explanations for the occurrences in the story and offers conflict and obstacles that the protagonist must overcome to hopefully create growth. These elements create a connection with the reader. It entices the reader to keep turning the pages.

Without a plot, it is difficult to create growth and movement for the protagonist. It might be comparable to looking at a still photo. It might be a beautiful photo and may even evoke emotions in the viewer, but how long do you think it would hold a reader’s attention?

Along with this, the plot molds the protagonist. It causes growth and movement in the character. Assume you have a timid woman who through circumstances, the plot, transforms into a brave, strong, forceful hero. Where would the story be without the events that lead this timid woman to move past herself and into a new existence?

Character Driven Story

On the other hand, a character-driven story creates a bond between the protagonist and the reader. It’s the development and growth of the character, the character’s personal journey, that motivates the reader to connect. There don’t need to be twists and turns or fireworks. The reader becomes involved with the character, and this is all the enticement the reader needs to keep reading.

In addition to this, the character works hand in hand with the plot to move the story forward. As the character begins her transformation, the plot moves in the same direction.

In some instances, such as short stories, a character-driven story can work amazingly well, such as in The Story of an Hour by Kate Chopin. In cases such as this, the connection developed between the character and the reader can be more than enough to satisfy the reader. But, all in all, it seems to be the combined efforts of a well-plotted and character-driven story that works the best.

The Best of Both Worlds

According to science fiction and fantasy writer L.E. Modesitt, Jr., “The best fiction should be an intertwined blend of character, plot, setting, and style.” I agree; all elements of a story working together create stories that will be remembered.

All the aspects of a story should complement each other, move each other forward to a satisfying conclusion, and draw the reader in.

If you have an action-packed plot-driven story that lacks believable and sympathetic characters, your story will be lacking. The same holds true if you have a believable and sympathetic character, but the story lacks movement, it will usually also fall short.

As with all things in life, balance is necessary; the same holds true when writing a story.

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